hi, this is my first message
I 'd like to ask for help, see this:
Thanks a lot!
Here is the piece.
Title:- Missing
A picture of a half finished oil painting of a man?s face, he appears to be in total shock and disbelief. This picture is providing the background of what follows.
((Q 1 :- You could help me here please: I?d like to describe a scene where 2 large security officers, in plain clothes, taking with them a young man, 19 yrs old, to the interrogation room located on the underground floor of a small building in the centre of town. The boy holding with his hands the half finished painting of his father as he could imagine him. Although he has never seen his father in all his life, whenever he asked where his father was he was always told he father went missing. The security service, though, is very inefficient and unprofessional, they themselves do not know where the father might be, although they haven?t given up looking for him))
Sit Down.
Q - Tell the truth, the whole truth, and nothing but the truth.
A - I will
q ? What is this?
a ? I don?t know.
q - is it finished?
a ? No it isn?t.
q ? is this art?
a ? No it isn?t.
q ? What is it?
a ? It?s a tragedy.
q ? Is it the first?
a - No it isn?t.
q ? is it the last?
a ? No it isn?t
q ? how old?
a ? it?s a mystery.
Q ? you didn?t like the start?
A ? no I didn?t
Is it your dirty art?
No it isn?t
Is it fantasy?
No it isn?t
What is it?
It?s the sad reality
Is he dead?
No he isn?t
Is he near?
No he isn?t
Is he far?
No he isn?t
This is bullshit
Sir, it isn?t
Is it fear?
No it isn?t
Then where is he?
Deep in my heart
Q 2:- Could a young man say " Deep in my heart " without sounding a bit too weak? He likes to show strength, innocence and care, any alternatives? ( better if ending sounds like art, heart, part, etc, )
Q 3:- your honest impression about this piece ( feel 100 % free )
Thanks in advance
( I am new here, I?d appreciate it if you could alert me with your answer:
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Ela
